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篇一:高考英语作文范文集锦

北京各区高三期末英语作文

海淀区

第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)

第一节 (15分)

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的班长李华, 你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国,请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括:

1. 询问她的近况;2. 回顾在外教课上的收获;3. 表达对她的感谢和祝福。

注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Lisa,

How have you beenYou must be enjoying your life back at home. We still miss the days we spent together.

In the last term, we all benefited a lot from your lessons. We improved our oral English and became more confident to express ourselves. In addition, we learned so much about western culture and tradition.

On behalf of my class, I would like to thank you for teaching us English! We wish you joy and happiness in the new stage of life!

Yours,

Li Hua

第二节 (20分)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“A visit to the Museum of the Anti-Japanese War”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争纪念馆的过程。

注意:词数不少于60。

二、内容要点:

1.到达; 2.参观; 3.听故事; 4.合影。

One possible version

Last Saturday, our class visited the Museum of the Anti-Japanese War. When our school bus arrived at the Museum, we got off and entered in line. The moment we went into the exhibition room, we were attracted by the pictures and descriptions about the war on the wall. Some students took notes while others had a little discussion. We were shocked at the cruelty of the war. Then we gathered in another room and listened to an old soldier telling the stories about the war. Therefore, we had a better understanding of the history.

Before we left, we all came to the front of the museum and took a picture with the old soldier in memory of our visit. We were very glad to meet such a true hero. We hope by visiting the museum more people can remember what happened in the war and treasure the peaceful life.

西城区

第四部分:书面表达 (共两节,35分)

第一节(15分)

作为交换项目的一部分,学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席,请向他们口头通知此事,内容包括:

1. 集合时间、地点; 2. 活动内容(介绍美国文化、教英文歌等); 3. 活动意义。 注意: 1. 词数不少于50; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

May I have your attention, please

That’s all. Thank you.

One possible version:

May I have your attention, please

This Friday you will visit Hong Xing Primary School as volunteers, which is a very important part of the exchange program. The school bus will pick you up at the school gate at 2 p.m. This trip aims to give the kids there a taste of American culture. You may prepare some mini lectures and teach the kids some simple but beautiful songs.

Through sharing your culture with them, you will know more about this country in return. We wish you all a good trip!

That’s all. Thank you.

第二节(20分)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍你和家人在去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程,并以“An Unforgettable Day”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。

注意: 1. 词数不少于60;2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

提示词:阳台 balcony 朋友圈WeChat Moments

An Unforgettable Day

On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II.

二、内容要点:

1.等待观看 2.观看阅兵 3.阳台拍照 4.分享感受

One possible version:

An Unforgettable Day

On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II. Ten minutes before the big event, we seated ourselves in front of the TV, eager to watch the live broadcast.

Soon the parade started. Seeing the soldiers and military equipment proceed along Chang’an Street, past Tian’anmen Square, we couldn’t help cheering and applauding for our powerful country.

Then the roaring of military aircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed to the balcony and took photos of the planes flying in formation. What an impressive scene!

I couldn’t wait to share my pictures and feelings with friends on WeChat Moments. To my surprise, WeChat was already flooded with numerous pictures and comments expressing love for our motherland. What an unforgettable day!

东城区

第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)

第一节(15分)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的外教Mr.Black写一封信,邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动,邮件的内容包括:

介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如:时间、地点、活动内容等等);

说明你发出邀请的原因;询问对方的意向。

注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Black,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Black,

I’m writing to invite you to take part in the reading circle in Grade 3. It will be held in the library next Monday from 3:30 to 5:00 p.m .We are going to read some popular English stories. Could you come and give us some guidance

We are looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

篇二:新课标高考英语备考必背英语作文的框架及典型范例

考前必背英语作文的框架(1)

★★★对比观点题型

(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1. 有一些人认为……

2. 另一些人认为……

3. 我的看法……

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).

Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.

Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is

that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they

think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

★★★阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.

1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.

2. 分析并举例使其更充实.

The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说

明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

★★★解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

考前必背英语作文的框架(2)

★★★说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides

-------------------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it

reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)

考前必背英语作文的框架(3)

★★★议论文的框架

(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some

n their point of view, on the one hand, is no doubt 二______.

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adily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

高考英语作文经典范文

一、与报社等讨论稿(带手机利弊)

[引出话题] middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.

二、看对照表格写调查(孩子出国利弊)

[调查内容] A survey is taken on public opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.

[调查结果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future. However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.

[解决措施]The survey shows that the government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. (句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)

三、读柱状图表写调查 [注意句式变换]

Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.

The most striking contrast is in teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15percent in these two fields. 4

What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists. Besides teaching, the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.

四、写信(过去/现在对比)

I once had a very happy family, but everything has

changedbecause of my father.

He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the

housework with my mother everyday.

However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father

五、图画+个人想法

One day during the summer holidays, I met my classmate Li Ming, whose nickname is Tao taopi. We chatted for a while as we walked. I asked him where he would go during the holidays. He replied that he had to stay at home studying. Then I’d like to know why he didn’t go out for a tour. Much to my surprise, he told me that it was just because he failed to be accepted by key universities.

In my opinion/Personally/ I think, traveling during the holidays not only increase a student’s knowledge of his or her motherland but also makes life meaningful. What’s more, at the present time, we students are suffering a lot both at home and school. Why not go out to get relaxed.

六、幽默画

We want our schoolbags lighter

[图画内容]The picture shows us a schoolboy and a big woman. The boy is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy bag. The woman is taking some exercise. The boy is saying to the woman jokingly: “Mum, if you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will easily lose weight….”

[社会实际]It’s quite common that Chinese students are overburdened with the lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to the teachers’ lectures, take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

[个人想法]We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way can we have time to do sports every day. Then we will be mentally and physically healthy.

七、 补全图画

Yesterday afternoon I went to the park. It so happened that I saw a touching event.

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篇三:2016高考英语写作考前冲刺卷(答案版)

一、满分范文熟读

好题展示

某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加;请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

① A friend in need is a friend in deed. ② Where there's a will, there's away.

注意:

1.词数120--150;

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:谚语proverb 佳作熟读

[亮点借鉴]

① 使用定语从句,提升了文章的档次。② but后的分句用了部分否定,使整个句子表达的意思恰到好处。③ 使用了非常复杂的句式。means后是一个that引导的宾语从句;宾语从句又是一个复合句,其中主句为祈使句 never give up,if引导条件状语从句,no matter how引导让步状语从句。④ 使用形容词比较级。⑤ 这个复合句中使用了几个高级词语:confront,enormous和perseverance,足见作者深厚的语言功底。⑥ that引导的宾’语从句中又含有一个as long as引导的条件状语从句。 语言积累

1. be resolved to do sth.决心做某事

好例:He was resolved to do well in the examination.他下定决心要在考试中取得好成绩。

2. sb. is confronted with sth./sth confronts sb.某人面临某种困难

好例:The new system was confronted with great

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写作攻略

提示类开放作文只提供一个话题或一段提示语,要求考生就所提供的内容展开想象,并按照要求完成写作任务。所涉及的话题包括日常学习和生活的各方面。近几年有很多地区的高考英语书面表达是提示类的开放作文。此类作文不仅考查考生英语书面表达的基本功,也考查考生的观察力、想象力、判断力和思维能力等。行文方式一般为夹叙夹议,先陈述某一现象,继而展开议论,发表自己的观点。写作的关键是立意明确,选材适当,符合试题要求。 满分模板

满分技巧

如果作文是围绕某个谚语警句进行的,则就要求大家联系客观实际来谈谈符合普遍价值观的理解。一般讲来。我们可以从下面三段着手进行写作:①介绍该名言警句 ②举例说明启示 ③阐述本人理解。 夺人眼球篇首句

1.I will treasure my time,enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.

2.We will have to learn to cope with any possible difficulty.

3.As more and more people...,much attention should be placed on...

随着越来越多的人,应更多关注..... 韵味无穷结尾句

1. If such measures were not taken, the problem of... would have been more serious.

2. Only in this way can we hope to have healthy development both physically and mentally.

3. In my point of view, we should be fully aware of our strengths and weaknesses and never blindly admire others, as no one is perfect.

difficulties at the beginning. 这项新制度刚开始就遇到了很大的困难。

二、满分模板巧用

三、话题素材积累 话题 总结与结论必背词汇

提分句型

1.In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth.

2.It may be briefly summed up as follows.

3. From what has been mentioned/said above, we can come to the conclusion that only by working hard can one achieve success.

4. In conclusion, we should like to thank all those who have worked so hard to bring about this result. 5.To conclude/To sum up, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy.

6. The results seem to suggest that teenagers are more easily addicted to computer games. 7.Altogether, honesty is the best policy.

8.Now we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything and; details make a difference.

9.It is safe to say that our success depends in our determination and perseverance.

亮点临摹

1.从以上所说,我们可以肯定地得出结论,失败和成功同 样重要。From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that failure is equally important as success.

2.总而言之,每个懈决方法都有其优缺点。In short, each solution has its advantages and disadvantages. 3.总的来说,出国留学舶好处远远大于坏处。 To sum up, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages greatly.

4.总而言之,旅游是为新的挑战做好准备的最好选择。 All in all, traveling is the best choice to get ready for the new challenges.

四、自我提升空间

一、高级表达

1.运用名词性从句升级句子

He often comes late and that makes his teacher angry.

→ That he often comes late makes his teacher angry. 2.运用定语从句升级句子

The regulation forced badly-behaved students to wear green scarves,and it raised a storm of objections.

→ The regulation forced badly-behaved students to wear green scarves,which raised a storm of objections.

3.运用状语从句升级句子

I won't believe what he says.

→ No matter what he says,I won't believe. 4,运用倒装句升级句子

Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting.

→ Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests. 二、提分句型

1. When it comes to ...当谈到,说到或涉及......

He is a man of few words,but when it comes toplaying computer games, he will be very talkative. 2.There is no need for sb to do sth.对某人来说没必要做某事

There is no need for me to praise it. It speaks foritself.无需我来称赞,那是不言自明的。

3.There is (no)difficulty/trouble/point/delay(in)doing...

做某事没困难/没意义/毫无耽搁

If we have finished our work, there is no point instaying any longer; we may as well go home. 三、佳句临摹

佳句1:But for some reason, not everyone in the teamis equally accepted and valued.

临摹1:由于某种原因,并非他所有的朋友都投票支持他。For some reason, not all his friends voted forhim.

佳句2:Never did he show interest in discussions orafter-class activities; nor did he ever raisehis hand to ask or answer questions. 临摹2:他从来都不做作业,也不参加任何考试。

Never did he do his homework, nor did he take any exam.

佳句3:So, never get used to being ignored. If ignored,work hard to make yourself stand out. 临摹3:任何习惯于被忽视的人都会失去自尊。

Whoever gets used to being ignored will loseself-respect.

五、好题作文感悟

[好题调研]

请根据以下提示,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文。 Being ignored in a team is a course of frustrating, but what really matters is not being ignored by others but being used to being ignored.

注意:1.无需写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;2.除诗歌外,文体不限;3.文中不得透霹个人姓名和学校名称;4.词数为120左右。 [谋篇布局]

[卷面构思]

[卷面成文]

六、热门话题猜想

Writing 1 不试不知道

Direction:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

You never know what you can till you try.请你根据这句话来记叙生活中发生的一件事;并谈谈你对这句谚语的理解。注意:1.不能写出自己的真实姓名和学校;2.不要写标题;3.词数不少于120。(请参考“话题八 学校生活”,“话题九 活动与事件”)

[范文]I am a shy girl, but I really like singing and am indeed good at it, which of course is only known by myself.

Last month, there was a singing competition in our school, aiming to pick out the best singers of the campus. I thought it might be a good chance for me to show myself. However, I was so shy that I even didn't have the courage to apply for the chance because I was so afraid to sing in front of my familiar schoolmates. Maybe they would laugh at me or look down upon me if I lost the competition or behaved badly. At that time, my best friend Xiao Yu knew it. She encouraged me a lot and said, "You never know what you can till you try." With her help, I caught the chance and bravely stood on the stage. Writing 2 走在路上

每个人都行走在自己的路上,有着不同的经历和收获。请你“On my way to...”为题写一篇英语作文,向学校英语报投稿,要求包括以下内容:1.叙述在路上你的经历;2.谈谈你的收获和感想。注意:1.词数不少于120;2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 [范文1]

On my way to school

As a Senior 3 student, I am punctual for every class but an unexpected thing that happened on my way to school yesterday morning changes it.

It was cold so every pedestrian rushed to their destination, including me. When arriving at the school gate, I found it was 2 minutes before the class began. That was enough for me. I was heading for my classroom when I saw an old man fall down in front of me. Sitting on the frozen floor, the old man looked helpless. Something in my inner heart urged me to help him out without any hesitation and not until his son came did I leave for my classroom. Of course, I was late and missed an important English class but I didn't regret. To be honest, if given another opportunity to make a choice between helping the old man and leaving, I will still choose the former because a world full of love depends on all of us. Only by assisting each other can we enjoy a more pleasant life. [范文2]

On my way to my dream

Every one of us has a dream and we are on the way to achieving it whether the way is smooth or tough.

As a Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my peers that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with what I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Of course, occasional anxiety and pressure did discourage me but with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I made it. I'm clear that ] still have a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how difficult it will be, I believe if I persist all the time, I will have it come true next June. As the proverb says,“Where there's a will there's a way.”

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